DB.3.0 Crit.
His DB3.3 consisted of a sequetion of the movie where the main character narate his thoughts, so it already had audio & visual. What Ramy did is that he hadded some animated handwriting as the opening credits and sometimes some letters would be overlined and others written over with another letter, so it gave a very dynamic & unpredictable feel to the text. As part of the audience, I found that this manner of revealing one letter at a time really draw me quickly into the movie , just trying to dechipher what were the name of the actors or of the crew members. Some mentionned that the narration was an element that distracted from reading the credits, to me it felt more like a background noise than a distraction , an good idea might be to lower the volume of the narrated sound so that it takes less space.
The reason why this opening credits really enhance the work is the the subject of this movie is memory or lack of it. And creating animated handwriting gives a feeling that the character is writing a diary where he tries to remember his past.
Again this D.B3.3 was of professional level, a superb work.








